Another paper update as I figure out how best to transition into the next section...

About halfway through page 11, but a great deal of the 10th page was me adding more clarification... So now I've got a full 13 pages, leaving me with about 3 more pages to revise, which was about the same as an hour ago. It's hard to make progress when I keep on creating more text and push back the stuff I'm trying to edit.

Also, sleepiness kicking in big time... Caffeine may have to be procured somewhere, or I may have to take a quick nap between papers. We'll see.